Liberation from Suffering

OM TARE TUTTUTARE TURE SOHA- Green Tara Mantra Liberation from all suffering

 

"Weightless"

May my breath be fresh like a mountain breeze

mentholated and cool as it expands in my lungs

because they are free from grief.

May my mind buzz with titillating electric currents

that speedily bring vision into reality

because I am free from the worry that repressed

all I'm meant to Be.

May my shoulders be light and flexible

because I am burden free

May my invisible wings be felt and witnessed

by the way I glide my feet.

May I find pleasure in my peace

because I recognize the God in me

and be comforted by the unknown

because something greater than my physical form is gently guiding me.

~Treneti

 

2 comments

  • Marian
    Marian USA
    I am not really into poems, but I got affected while reading this one. This poem, though it was a short one, has affected me in so many ways, that is why i want to thank you for sharing it to us. back when I was still writing for https://russhessays.com/termpaperwriting.html , I knew that poem was one of the hardest things that I can do! But up to these days, i am still trying to learn it. I know that I am making sense!

    I am not really into poems, but I got affected while reading this one. This poem, though it was a short one, has affected me in so many ways, that is why i want to thank you for sharing it to us. back when I was still writing for https://russhessays.com/termpaperwriting.html , I knew that poem was one of the hardest things that I can do! But up to these days, i am still trying to learn it. I know that I am making sense!

  • Treneti
    Treneti
    Thanks for sharing Marian. I love hearing your perspective on the poetry. For me formal writing has always been more challenging I find a lot of freedom and fluidity in writing lyrics and poetry. Less grammar, more essence :) I believe there is no wrong way to write a poem and that is what makes them fun!

    Thanks for sharing Marian. I love hearing your perspective on the poetry. For me formal writing has always been more challenging I find a lot of freedom and fluidity in writing lyrics and poetry. Less grammar, more essence smile I believe there is no wrong way to write a poem and that is what makes them fun!

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